This week I did a re-edit of Holland's animatic! You can check out the edit as well as her blog below.
First I did a bit of retiming at the beginning of the animatic and cut frames I didn't feel were needed. The biggest changes came at the end, which I wanted to really work with the blooming scenes. I wanted to get across the idea of a wave sweeping through the room, and thought that by ending with the wall behind the woman erupting into bloom, it would be a good way to illustrate a sense of being surrounded by life. I also lengthened the final shot after the bloom, and think having a slow fade with the whistling continuing into the credits. Otherwise, I think the animatic is in a good place!
Check out Holland's blog!
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